1. I added a title page which contains the topic and, because it focusses on a specific event, I decided to put the date of the fire on the title page as well.
2. I simplified much of the text, removing what could merely be spoken and didn't need to be shown on the slide.
3. I segregated the large portions of text into separate points or slides of their own. The previous slides had too much text.
4. I added some images to the slides.
5. Instead of the original full sentence structure, I switched to using point form, keeping the slides simple but informative.
6. I added titles for individual slides as the originals lacked the focus that a title provides.
7. I decided to make the eyewitness' slide narrative driven. It just seemed to me that the information on that slide should be spoken in its entirety and not jotted down in point form. For the slide I made a heading followed by some images and a quotation given by the woman. Although this significantly shortened the amount of slides, this is how I would prefer it.
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